Wednesday, 16 April 2008

My Little Secret: Chapter 20

#01: Gakuen Alice (Natsume & Mikan)
...xXx...
When will you come back again, Mikan? Natsume asked himself. He really wished he could say that to Mikan.
"Hyuuga, Mikan asked me to give you this," Hotaru said as she handed a small box and an envelope with light pink color and Sakura prints on the right side of the envelope.
'Mikan…' Natsume thought as he recognised the pattern.
Natsume,
I don't know how to tell you this but I would have to say… I'm sorry, for the second time. I know you were worried about me but please understand that I'm doing this for everyone and… for you… I have to go back to America to fix the damage from the fight between us and the AAO. I don't know when I will be back in Japan, but I still hope that you will wait for my return. When I'm back, there is something I need to tell you. Please take care of yourself, Natsume.
With love,
Mikan
Of course, I will wait for you, he thought while looking at the necklace with Mikan's Nullification Alice stone on it.

...xXx...
The class was the same as always. Though, Yuu and Nonoko as well as Koko and Anna were couples now. And of course, our Ice Queen was still with the animal boy, which left the fire caster with the status of a single person.
"Good morning, class," Narumi-sensei greeted with a really big smile.
"Morning, Sensei," they replied dully.
"We have a new student?" Koko asked after reading their homeroom teacher's mind.
"Koko-kun, I should be the one who tell everyone about it. Anyway, we do have a new classmate today."
New student? Natsume thought under his manga that covered his face.
"Please come in," Narumi-sensei said.
When someone stepped into the classroom, the class gasped.
What is it all about? Natsume thought and took a peek from his manga then gasped. Mikan! His manga dropped to the floor, breaking the silence within the classroom.
"Well, may you introduce yourself again?" Narumi-sensei smiled.
The brunette grinned. "Mikan Sakura. Pleased to meet you all."
"Mikan-chan!" Anna and Nonoko exclaimed.
"Mikan-sama…" the fan boys cried.
Why aren't you wearing your mask? Natsume thought angrily as he got up and dragged Mikan out of the classroom without a second thought.
The situation reminded Mikan of their last night together so much that she remained quiet. When they reached the sakura tree, she stared at him. "You know, you don't have to drag me like that."
Natsume looked into her eyes. "Why?"
She was confused. "Eh?"
"Why aren't you wearing your mask?"
"Well, we’re already in high school so I thought—"
"I don't want any other guy see your face," he said, interrupting her.
She was slightly surprised when he suddenly hugged her.
"Why?" she muttered quietly.
"Because…"
"Because…?"
"I…"
She couldn't stand the silence. "Natsume?"
"I like you a lot," he confessed and when she was about to answer him, he kissed her lips.
After he pulled away, she began, "I—"
"I know. You don't have to answer my feelings," he interrupted her.
When he was about to walk away, she grabbed his hands. "Will you just let me finish my words?"
"I like you, too, Natsume. Why else would I give you my Alice stone?"
He blinked. She likes me, too…
She smiled. "Yes, Natsume. I like you, too."
"Will you be my girl then?"
Still smiling, she replied, "Tell me why I have to say no?"
He hugged her instantly. They remained there for a long while. When they returned to the classroom, Anna and Nonoko were the first to approach her.
"Mikan-chan! You really look beautiful without the mask," both girls said in union.
"Arigatou." Mikan smiled. They still same as always.
"So… I believe that you two are together now," Hotaru said out of the blue.
Mikan blushed.
"Mikan-chan and Natsume-kun are a couple now!" Anna said, surprised.
"You two look perfect for each other," added Nonoko.
Mikan closed her eyes dejectedly. "Why is everyone talking about me again?"
The classroom filled with laughter.
"Don't you dare make her cry, or you will face the consequences, Hyuuga," Hotaru said.
"Hn," Natsume grunted.
Mikan glanced at Natsume. He just gave her his Alice stone minutes ago. Hopefully, no one would find out about that. Her entire secret would always be exposed by Hotaru. Not that she hated Hotaru for being herself. She just wanted to keep the news for herself, for now. At the very least, she wanted this to be… my little secret.
The End
Thanks for reading.

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67 comments:

  1. the ending was soo sweet xD thx for writing this xD

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  2. ...aw!

    ...what an ending!

    ..hekhek

    ..sorry for not reviewing, ne? im quiet busy!

    ..but at least i have time for reading your fictions! hehe

    ..that was awesome!

    ...goodluck on your other stories!

    ..gambatte!

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  3. wah it's over?

    hahaha...nice story!

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  4. OMG! what a cute ending! perfect ending! i hope you'll continue makin more stopries! :)

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  5. Damn it, I thought it was right, oh well I thought I would cry like if Mikan came back and there was a girl, but Oh well. HAHA, I LOVED THE ENDING! *faints*Oh she fainted again, oh and hi I'm her brother yeah she's really weird she tells me stuff like, "I NEED cute18386 TO UPDATE!" Then she faints. HAHA, if you don't think this is her brother then it is, my sisters are checking her there's two of them. By the way I read your story too and it's great! She's saying stuff, like, "Let me go to the computer." Well bye now, before she wakes up.

    I think it's saku-chan Okay, BYE!

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  6. it's finished! i love it!

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  7. KYA! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER! T_T LOVE IT! THANKS FOR WRITING IT!

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  8. I wanna be your buddy! :)

    The ending was awesome! Over protective Natsume doesn't want anyone to even look at her face :O That's like over the top XD

    I lovee the story! Hope you can make another one! :P

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  9. The ending was fairly simple yet sweet. At least Natsume didn't become a coward and manage to have the guts to finally tell Mikan how he feels. He's really the possessive type. He doesn't want any other guy to see Mikan's beautiful face. That was sweet. I did love the ending. Good job.

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  10. .,ne, finally it's done... haha... i really loved this story, it's sweet and romantic... haha... finally, that was what i was waiting for, for them to finally get together...cute... i'll wait for your future stories... i hope those stories will be as good as this one...]

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  11. thats a nice ending!

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  12. GOMENASAI! i havent been reviewing... its been so busy with school and all... we were suddenly piled with projects... -.- sorry! please update soon!

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  13. Wel... This chappie had just answered my question...

    I mean did Natsume hear Mikan confess...?

    But how many months or years were they apart..?

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  14. I LUV IT! NATSUMIKAN FOREVER! i don't really agree with the HotaruxRuka pairing though... i actually can't stand it but i still luv your story! FAVIES!

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  15. The ending so sweet!

    Please write more!

    Good Job!

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  16. Mina: Hi! Nice story! It was soo sweet and had me glued to the screen the whole story! What do you think Aiko-chan?

    Aiko: Yeah! Loved it! I was just wondering... Does Mikan still love Akira? I mean as more than friends...?

    Mina: Yeah... I mean she loves Natsume so what happens to her feelings for Akira?

    Aiko and Mina: Loved your story! Hope you continue to write more!

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  17. cute!make more moremore!

    ok...its

    cute!

    make more...heheheheehehe peace...

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  18. Onee-chan!

    i really liked this story of yours too!

    i hope you will keep writing such wonderful stories...

    love,

    tenshi :)

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  19. aw...

    love this last chapter...

    especially the last part...

    "my little secret.."

    its so awesome...

    c: cooll!

    anyways, love this to death...

    c:

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  20. YES! THANK YOU HAPPY ENDING! Let me tell you someting Missy, you have made me go through an emotinal rollar coaster. I laughed, I cried, I smiled, but mostly I cried. I love this story but you on the other hand have me bawling like there's no tommorrow but I like how you made Mikan tough. I'm looking forward reading more of your work.

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  21. wuah..!

    it's very good!

    kyaa..

    your stories always good, onee-chan..

    natsume is so cute..!

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  22. uwah so nice

    and love it i hope you finish the princess of sakura kingdom

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  23. Nice...it's really sweet...

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  24. - I really like this story!

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  25. Happy enDing at lasT.. wohO... YihEE..

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  26. hi i love it espdcially to the part where aki kun died i really cried u know even though i read it many times already so nice

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  27. EH! SarahPatrick is your imotou!

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  28. Hah I loved it

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  29. nice fic! love it!

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  30. this was a really great story

    thnx for writing it

    thnx

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  31. TTTT such a kawaii ending! I love dis dramatic story...I Added author to my Author Alert list

    Added author to my Favorite Authors list

    Added story to my Favorite Stories list

    Added story to my Story Alert list

    :D I hope you will continue to make more fanfictions

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  32. Wah! I wanted Mikan Akira! He was so sweet! Haha. Ok. I PREFER Mikan Akira but Mikan Natsume work too.

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  33. wai I knew that I would like this story as soon as I saw the title (in case ur wondering why, before i read this, I always used My_Little_Secret as a nickname ) it was a great story

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  34. Ne, that was really good! I hoped that the others liked it too ne?:) arigatou for doing this:)

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  35. This was one of the richest stories I have ever read. You have talent, so dont stop writting ever!

    Ill be waiting for new stories.

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  36. Nice Story...

    Thanks for the upload. _

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  37. so kawaii!

    i love these kinds of stories! XD

    specially if the author actually FINISHES THE STORY!

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  38. nice

    i liked it the end could probably have been better but its good at the same time with the whole mu little sectret end. i like it but it stills sounds unfinished yet finished at the same time cuz they end up together. you shouldnt haveput it all together mashed together at the very end though,Good job though and keep up the good work

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  39. wahh!

    it's so dramatic!

    i cried!

    wahh!

    keep up da' gud work!

    wahh!

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  40. this story is fantastic! congrats... I'll be looking forward to your stories...

    O.o

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  41. aww ur strory is realy sweet specaily the song! ilove it!

    u such an good author!

    this the best story ever!

    i love it!

    oh if u have time plz check out song of my stoyr 2 plz and review it thx!

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  42. Good Story although the last chappie is short but I like it!

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  43. aw, i felt bad when akira died, but i liked the fic! btw, where did u get the name akira from?

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  44. Hey Hasegawa-senpai, This story was great. Wow i truley loved it.

    Gomen for not reviewing for the past 19 chapter but the story is great.

    You have some amazing story, i can't wait for ur other story ! Well until next story .!

    Kumi-chan

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  45. Wah! I cried when Akira died! So sadd! But overall with the story, fantastic job! I loved it!

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  46. Wow! this story is also wonderful senpai!

    i really love ur story!

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  47. i love this story i really like all of your stories hehehehehehehe more power! keep up the gud work ja ne! :))

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  48. i liked the ending because the little secret turned out just to be an alice stone and i thought it would be bigge :D:D

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  49. Ok, today I just read your whole story, and I LOVED IT!

    sure, it made my eyes water when Akira died... And some other things caused some other emotions... But I still loved it!

    My fave Gakuen Alice story!

    Keep writing GA stories PLEASE!

    Kristen.

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  50. Just finished reading the whole story.

    It was really good.

    Nice job on making it. :D

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  51. What A beautiful story..

    I wish you will make more of story like this...

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  52. this is on my list hehehe..

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  53. SOOOO BEAUTIFUL!

    I LOVE THE SONGS!

    GO NATSUXMIKAN

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  54. Aw! Again, another dramatic piece of work. This was very surprising and odd in some ways because though Serio is nice I still find it hard to believe he CAN be, ya know? But still, it did not deter me from reading. In fact, it gave me a new found love for our evil DA teacher. XD This was another fabulous fic! I loved the plot and I know that you are revising this, so I don't have to say much about that. In any case, keep on writing to your hearts content. :D *hearts*

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  55. Love it ! I totally love your story and how you end it ! 3

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  56. Cool! 0. o. O. .0 Ehehehe! I 3 this story!

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  57. Totally awesome!

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  58. lub.lub.U18:27

    good story.. hope you ake more interesting stories...HAVE A GREAT AND HAPPY DAY...

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  59. NOOOOOOOOOO! AKIRA! Don't leave Mikan! Wow...I broke down at the part where Akira dies... Your story rocks! I'm a Fan of YOU!

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  60. awe there own lttle secret how nice and cute:)

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  61. Chokoreeto-chan18:29

    That was awesome! Please write sequels! Natsume and mikan...faints so jelly of them!

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  62. Anonymous18:29

    How Amazing Loved It

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