Friday, 9 April 2010

Rainbow: Chapter 1

#28: Gakuen Alice (Natsume & Mikan)
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"What do I like?" he repeated her question without missing a word.
She nodded in confirmation. "Yes. What do you like? I like strawberries."
"Chocolate," he replied curtly after a moment.
"I didn't know you like chocolate, Natsume…"
He smirked.
She blinked.
"Why?" he questioned.
"What why?" She tilted her head.
"Why not?"
She blinked again.
"Why do you like strawberries?"
"Because they're red."
"Why?"
"Because they're red," she repeated.
He resisted the urge to roll his eyes.
"Your eyes," she answered finally. "What about you, Natsume?"
"You have the answer already." He grinned.
She blushed prettily, and he smirked.

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20 comments:

  1. SonyaShulen12:24

    This is so short, but it's so cute. 3

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  2. The Missing Dream12:25

    SO CUTE NEE-CHAN.. :)

    cant wait for the other colors.. hahaha... X)

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  3. mangagirl21412:25

    hahahha. aw that's cute :3

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  4. aNiMeLoVeRs2112:26

    Well, it's short. But, it's very sweet! :D

    Can't wait for another chapter! _

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  5. Yuuto Tamano12:26

    too short! but like it nice job! I always love your fic!

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  6. amanda12:27

    this was sweet! I liked it

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  7. chris316951212:29

    I'm taking a break from studying for my placement test. ( : Gaah. I'm wondering at what pace you're going to upload the rest of the drabbles. xD

    Cute. ( : Aww Mikan blushed prettily. :3 xD

    Keep up the great work

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  8. Anonymous12:29

    so short... a drabble indeed..

    oh well Good job! Keep it up!

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  9. Sunshine and SMiles12:29

    that's SHORT, SIMPLE AND CUTE!

    whoa, I'm smiling like crazy here...)

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  10. moonacre9912:30

    nice chapter senpai!

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  11. Marse Speaks12:30

    :DD
    so cute! I like it! n_n

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  12. MiNi-RAi12:31

    Wahaha! Nice one!

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  13. OrangeKiss12:31

    nice! love it.. XD

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  14. KazeNoSakura12:32

    First off, these drabble series seem very interesting. You can only imagine how many reviews I'll be leaving since they are drabbles. :D Tell me, how do you do it?

    In any case, this was absolutely adorable! I liked what transpired between the two. It was just too sweet for words!

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  15. Mei Vir D. Ripper12:32

    Waaaaaaaah.! Okay... That was just cute.. XD

    Somehow I'm not surprised at their answers.. XD

    And I checked the number of words.! It's 100.! XD

    Now on to the next chappy.! XD

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  16. EzMouse12:33

    I'm taking a break from reading Duty-Bound to read your 100/200-word chaptered stories. XD

    This chapter made my heart flutter.

    I didn't even get it at first, so I reread again and finally got it. So cute. :)

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  17. Ria Lee12:33

    It feels good to read your stories once again. I can't believe I haven't noticed this before. Erm, moving on...

    I really never got it at first, but when I re-read it, it made me giggle. This is so cute!

    Cheerio, Ria x

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  18. Ridley Silverlake12:34

    That was cute. :3 I actually had to read it twice to get it. o O But I loved it. XD

    Plus, strawberries and chocolates make a good combination. :3

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  19. Freesia12:34

    Haha, that was cute; even interesting that Mikan loves strawberries because they're red - just like his eyes. And that Natsume loves chocolates exactly for the same reason; how cute. :)

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  20. magicdanilies12:35

    i like but i little short oh well forget about it still gggooooodddd heheheh :P

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