Sunday, 11 April 2010

Rainbow: Chapter 2

#28: Gakuen Alice (Natsume & Mikan)
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He hated shopping, but he couldn't let her go by herself. So much for love.
"I feel like eating oranges." She tapped her chin while looking at rows of fruits on display.
"I feel like eating Oranges, too," he commented after staring at her lips.
She didn't pay attention to what he said, but she heard him nonetheless. "What did you say?"
He replied by kissing her on the lips. He smirked. "Hm… I think Oranges are tastier than oranges; don't you think so?"
She blushed from his sudden kiss, but realization dawned on her.
"Pervert!" She flushed in embarrassment.

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15 comments:

  1. The Missing Dream12:37

    pervert Natsume.. :)

    very funny!

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  2. chris316951212:37

    8D HAHA. SO CUTE. EPIC USE OF JAPANESE.

    ( : I'm amazed by how you can make all of the drabbles exactly 100 words. Gaah

    :D Keep up the great work!

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  3. aNiMeLoVeRs2112:38

    So you mean that the oranges in italic is Mikan.. haha.. _

    This is as interesting as the first chapter, although shorter.. haha...

    Anyway, keep up the amazing work! C:

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  4. Sunshine and SMiles12:41

    I'm already wondering what's with YELLOW, eh?

    heheheheheheheheheheheh) I'm actually eating oranges now-i mean the fruit...hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

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  5. mangagirl21412:41

    heheh. ahh! this is cute too! XD

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  6. moonacre9912:42

    this chapter is so Kawaii!

    like ur story senpai!

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  7. Marse Speaks12:42

    :DD silly, Natsume.

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  8. korin-chan0712:45

    hhi. Lurve that

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  9. MiNi-RAi12:46

    Natsume's being a perv again :P Aww.. but it's so cute when he's like that, especially when he's jealous XD

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  10. KazeNoSakura12:46

    Haha, I soooo knew that would happen. XD Natsume, Natsume, Natsume. We all know you want to devour her, lol. Get a room! XD

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  11. Mei Vir D. Ripper12:46

    -copy and pastes on word doc-

    Its 100 again.. XD

    Okay check.

    Double meanings... I like it. XD

    Next, mikan should use Natsume's fruit name.. But how would she say it.? XD

    Isn't natsume's fruit name Natsume too.? XD

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  12. EzMouse12:47

    Tangerine kiss. :") That was cute. Hahaha. XD

    Hahaha. Typical perverted Natsume. :P

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  13. Ria Lee12:48

    Wow. Nice move Natsume, while I think this was cute and sweet, I also could help but laugh at Natsume's pervy side popping out of nowhere. ))

    Nicely done!

    Ria x

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  14. Ridley Silverlake12:48

    I don't know why I'm grinning up to now. X3

    And Natsume never changes, does he? :P

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  15. Freesia12:48

    Cool; another play at the pun with their name. I like it; Mikan's name translates to Oranges and all that glitz. Quite creative. :)

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