#35: Gakuen Alice (Natsume & Mikan)
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The moment he opened his eyes, his body went stiff, and he almost screamed in shock. Almost. When he realised who or what it was, he relaxed before groaning internally. He was quite content with his life, until two weeks ago. That faithful day was the first time he screamed so loud in his life. Even though it was so out of character for him to scream in the first place, he couldn't help it....xXx...
It was like any other day when he returned to his small apartment, which was only two blocks away from the book store. Things went downhill when he reached his place. Instead of finding an abandoned puppy or a kitten in a box, he found a ghost! Yes, a ghost! Oh no, he didn't believe in such spiritual beings, but when it appeared in front of his face, what choice did he have? He already had a hard time believing his eyes when she spoke to him while floating, too. At that time, he wanted to believe he was dreaming. Too bad for him, it was too real to be called a dream. Honestly speaking, he preferred a lost puppy more than a lost ghost.
Lol! Natsume screams! xD o3o So why would Mikan be in a box?
ReplyDeleteLol id shit my pants finding a lost ghost
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of 200 words each chapter! I can't wait to see how you do this story. It sounds very interesting, and the fact that each chapter is so precisely consistent makes it even more so.
ReplyDeleteNice prologue. Good luck with the next chapter! :)
Hahas this seems really interesting! XD can't wait for the next chapter pls update soon! :D
ReplyDeleteIts a ghost love story... Wow... o.o
ReplyDeleteThis actually reminded me of a personal story that I've written back in the past.. XD
Only the were original characters... And the story died a horrible death caused by epic procrastination and writer's block.. hahahaha.. XD
And my MS word mobile says its 200 words.! OwO
Well done.! -claps hands-
Ghost story! Now this is interesting, as I am writing one myself. Only, in my story, Natsume is the ghost. :P
ReplyDeleteNice prologue. Comparing how he’d rather find a lost puppy than a ghost.
Pretty interested on this one already. :)
I can't even imagine Natsume screaming on top of his lungs. XD
ReplyDeleteWow, if it were me, I'd really run for my life - especially when the ghost talks for real.
Gah, I am imagining things now. ))
Ria x
The thing with ghosts these days gets even more popular and popular. Why? This is already second time I'll start to read a story about ghost and human. I hope that I'll like this story. :)
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I've never been a fan of the supernatural genere, but this is interesting. I'm pretty amused Natsume doesn't seem to be bothered by a ghost at all, but I guess that's him being in character. Likewise, I'm interested to know where this is going. A love between a ghost and a living human being? Interesting.
ReplyDeleteI actually came here looking for Duty-Bound so I could finally continue reading it, but I don't see it in your archive. ]:
ReplyDeleteSo I came to read this instead. :D
I like where this is going. :3
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