Tuesday, 27 April 2010

Rainbow: Chapter 8

#28: Gakuen Alice (Natsume & Mikan)
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After the rain stopped, they stood at the balcony and waited for the beautiful phenomenon to appear in the sky.
Mikan smiled when she finally saw it. Without looking at her husband, she asked, "What do you see when you look at it?"
He pulled her into his arms from behind and whispered into her ear. "What do you see?"
She frowned. "Please don't answer me with a question, Natsume."
He gave a low chuckle. "Your answer?"
"I see you…" she muttered softly.
While looking at the rainbow, he smiled. "I see you, too, when I look at the rainbow."
The End
Thanks for reading.

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25 comments:

  1. Lawl, whoa. I never knew that you ranked your reviewers. xD

    Yay, I'm awesome. :3

    The drabbles were all very cute. ( : Nice tie up!

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  2. hahaha... Natsume just repeated what Mikan answered... but its very sweet! :)

    hope to read more stories and drabbles from you nee-chan.. :)

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  3. Woah.. I love you drabbles! It's cute and sweet.
    So, they finally married in chapter 8. Awesome.
    I always love your stories.

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  4. kawai *fangirl cheer*
    T.T WA it's the end T.T

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  5. YIPEE!

    i'm a wonderful reviewer!
    thank you... i love the ending..whwhahahahahahahah! They're married! whahahahahah) and he's so swet!...
    Violets... It's just that when we're talking about violets, I'm always thinking of Hotaru,... but it's fine, so Ok! it's about them... and I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

    write more okay?

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  6. Hoee! So sweet! Love it!

    Good luck with your upcoming fics! Tc. n_n

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  7. I did get it but everytime the chapter is new, it's always an error so I usually wait for a few days.. Aww.. The last chapter was so sweet.. :3

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  8. Woah, it's finally the end.. XD
    Cute chapter! :) And thanks for the "Awesome Reviewer".. hehe..
    I can't wait for the next stories that you will make in the future.. :D Keep up the good work! C:

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  9. Anonymous17:21

    D It's so sweet
    this remind me of avatar (blue ones, not the legend of avatar/aang).. I see you..
    Good job! I'm waiting for your next work!

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  10. kawaii ne! kawaii drabbles...:] again a nice story from you keep up the good work

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  11. oh ho hos, calling me a great reviewer?
    aww shucks.
    just kidding. :)

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  12. lia 10117:23

    I really like it. Extremely cute.

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  13. i was curious about the "I see you" part...?

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  14. awww.. that was lovely.. I don't know why but when I read your drabbles it emitted a serene atmosphere. Maybe it's the effect of the rainbow. or it's just me.. still.. great work! ,

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  15. That was cute, and I really liked the ending. :)

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  16. anime freak17:25

    OMG cute plot!

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  17. Aw. A befitting end to an adorable story. :D Like I said, loved the unique idea surrounding this. :)

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  18. bored17:25

    3 cute

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  19. Awwwwwwwww... They should have kissed.! _

    It's a must that they kiss at the end of the story... XD

    It was touching and funny all at the same time.. XD

    I laughed at Mikan's childishness when she thought she could actually know something Natsume doesn't.

    And I learned knew meanings to each of the colors.! XD

    Thumbs up Sachi.!

    Still 100 through and through.. Now I can't wait for your 300 drabbles to finish.. XD

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  20. Full of fluff! My insides are drowning in fuzziness.

    Good job. :3

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  21. Oh goodness gracious my fluff bunny is killing me. 3 My heart is just floating with all these fluff in the world. XD

    This is one of the greatest drabbles I've ever read so far. Two thumbs up! And thank you for making my heart flutter with this again. :D

    Cheerio!

    Ria x

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  22. Freesia17:28

    Aw, this was really cute! What a wonderful way to end the collection; to combine all colors and finally end with a rainbow. Great work; I really appreciate this one. Very symbolic and sweet. Kudos. :)

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  23. waaaaahhhhh!so sweet and fluffy!

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