Sunday, 30 March 2008

My Fiancé: Chapter 7

#02: Gakuen Alice (Natsume & Mikan)
...xXx...
"Welcome back, Young Mistress." Rin smiled and bowed humbly.
Mikan returned her smile. "It's good to be back, Rin."
It's been two years, Mikan thought absentmindedly as she looked around the house. Everything had pretty much remained the same.
"Young Mistress, your room is ready for you to rest in."
"Arigatou, Rin." Mikan nodded. She then made her way to her room and saw her mother already there. "Okaa-san?"
"Dear, I need to discuss something with you."
"Oh?" Mikan replied while unpacking her luggage.
"We have arranged everything for you and Natsume-kun."
Natsume… she thought before asking her mother, "What do you mean, Okaa-san?"
Yuka looked at her daughter closely. "We already reserved a place for the two of you to meet again… tonight…"
"Tonight? Why not tomorrow? I just came back from America, Okaa-san," Mikan whined, but Yuka only chuckled. "Don't you miss him?"
Yuka laughed when Mikan blushed crimson. Meanie…
Before leaving her daughter, Yuka smiled. "Rin will help you get ready."
As if on cue, Rin appeared before her with several gowns. "Miss, please choose one of these gowns."
Mikan could tell that it was more than ten gowns. She sweat dropped. Don't you think that this is a bit too much?

...xXx...
"Sume-chan, tonight you will need to attend a special dinner with a special girl," Kaoru chirped happily.
A vein popped out of Natsume's head. "Okaa-san, please don't call me with that name." He then remembered what she just said. "What did you say just now?"
Kaoru smiled. "You will attend dinner with a special girl."
Natsume thought about the word 'special' for a while. "Who is she?"
"Well… actually, she's your fiancée, Natsume."
"Fiancée? Okaa-san! You know I hate it when—" He stopped himself and sighed heavily instead. "This is the old man's plan, isn't it?"
"Natsume, please understand, your father only thinks about what's best for you, okay?"
Isn't this the same thing as what happened two years ago? Natsume thought before sighing dejectedly.
"Be ready by seven," Kaoru said and walked out of his room.
Mikan… when will you come back? Natsume thought and closed his eyes. It's been two long years…

...xXx...
"Okaa-san, I also want to meet Mikan-nee," Youichi whined. It's been two years. I've missed her a lot…
"Not now, You-chan."
"Why? Natsume-nii can meet Mikan-nee, so why can't I?"
Kaoru smiled. "Because this is only for the two of them, You-chan. You know that we kept their engagement a secret, right?"
Youichi nodded his head.
"Since the two of you have been transferred to Alice Academy, Sume-chan and Mikan-chan's relationship has improved a lot, so we need to set them up again."
Youichi sweat dropped. "Okaa-san, why do you always call Natsume-nii, Sume-chan?"
"Because it's cute!"
"But it's not masculine at all when Okaa-san calls him that!" Youichi pouted.
Kaoru looked at him. "You-chan, don't tell me that you want to be like Sume-chan?"
Natsume-nii is perfect in everything, so of course, I want to be like him. Youichi looked away from his mother.
Kaoru giggled. "Now you know why you can't go with Sume-chan, right?"
"Okaa-san, please stop calling Onii-chan like that!" Youichi said, protesting with a whine and saw his older brother, dressed in a black tux, stepped down the stairs. "Natsume-nii!"
"Sume-chan looks so handsome!" Kaoru exclaimed.
"Okaa-san, I thought I told you not to call me by that name."
Kaoru ignored his complaint completely. "Please treat her nicely, Sume-chan!"
Youichi smiled up at his older brother when he patted his silver head. Good luck, Natsume-nii.

...xXx...
So this is the place, huh? Natsume thought, glancing around the scheduled place that was reserved for two. He tried to look for his fiancée but could find no one. Who could this girl be? I hope it's not a stupid fan girl… Mikan, when will you come back?
"Looks like you really miss me, Natsume."
His eyes widened as he recognised that voice. Mikan?
Soon, he saw her pass by his side and sat in front of him. He looked at her closely. Mikan, is that really you?
She really looked beautiful with her simple red gown.
"May I serve the dinner now, Mikan-sama?" one of the waiters asked politely.
"Yes, please." Mikan nodded at the waiter before looking at her fiancé. "When will you stop staring at me?"
Natsume snapped back to reality. "Mikan, why are you here?"
He then remembered the one he should meet was his fiancée.
She smiled. "Hm… because I have to meet my fiancé here?"
"Your fiancé?" he asked, thoroughly confused.
He heard her sigh.
"Looks like Kaoru-baa-san didn't tell you anything about this."
"..."
"Natsume, two years ago when you brought Sumire as your girlfriend, the engagement was not cancelled at all. My mother insisted that you and I must be engaged, but it will only be known by us. The people who knew about this are Hotaru, Koko, Akira and our families. So, all this time, you have been my fiancé, Natsume."
You are my fiancée? He thought in disbelief.
She hummed. "Can I assume that you don't want to be my fiancé?"
"What? No! I-it's just—"
"Too sudden," she supplied. "Don't you have anything else to say to me, Natsume?"
"Of course, I do." He smiled and mentally thanked his father.


...xXx...
"Class, someone familiar from the past will join us today," Narumi-sensei informed, and Koko smiled knowingly.
"Ah, Koko-kun. You already know about it, don't you?" Narumi-sensei said with a grin.
The class looked at Koko curiously while Natsume smirked under his manga that was covering his face.
"Please come in," Narumi-sensei said to the new student.
The class gasped when a very beautiful brunette with a pair of hazel eyes stood in front of them.
"Mikan Yukihira. Nice to meet you," the brunette said, smiling.
The class went wild.
"Mikan-sama!"
"Yukihira-sama, you're back!"
"Mikan-chan! We missed you so much!" Anna and Nonoko said in unison as they hugged her.
Mikan smiled. "I'm back, everyone."
Long time no see, Mikan. Looks like you are doing fine, Koko said mentally, and Mikan grinned. You, too, Koko.
"Your partner and your seat will still be the same, Mikan-chan," Narumi-sensei informed with a big smile on his face.
Mikan nodded. "Arigatou, Sensei."
She walked to her seat, which was beside Natsume.
Before leaving the classroom, Narumi-sensei said, "Free period for all of you."
Just when the boys began to go near to Mikan, they yelped in pain, for their pants were on fire. The class was shocked because Natsume Hyuuga had never done this before.
"Natsume, don't be so mean to them," Mikan exclaimed. She snapped her fingers, and the fire vanished immediately.
"I have every right to do so," Natsume said confidently.
Mikan sighed.
The class was confused because of what Natsume said.
"I won't allow any guys to get near my fiancée," Natsume said with a-matter-of-fact tone.
The class was shocked and screamed in unison, "Say what?!"
"Despite of the mishap two years ago, Natsume-san and Mikan are actually still engaged," explained Koko while nodding.
The fan girls cried and some of them even fainted.
"It's not fair! Natsume-sama should be mine!"
"No! He should be mine!"
"You're ugly, he should be mine!"
From then on, the fan girls fought each other. The class, including Mikan, sweat dropped. Natsume, who couldn't stand the noise, pulled her out of the classroom. Soon, both found themselves settled down under the same sakura tree. After a short silence, Mikan started, "Why did you tell everyone about our engagement?"
I don't want any guy to touch you, thought Natsume, still reading his manga.
She smiled upon reading his thoughts and snatched the manga.
"What are you doing?"
He tried to get his manga back, but she prevented it.
"Mikan, give me back that manga, or else," he threatened, and she smirked at him.
"You won't do anything to me," she said confidently.
Before she knew what was happening, her back was already pressed against the ground. He leaned closer to her face while she blushed like a steamed crab.
"This is what I will do to you, little girl…"
He kissed her lips before letting her hands go and pulled her closer. She closed her eyes, enjoying their second kiss. It had been a long time. The kiss lasted for a minute before they broke apart for air.
Unknown to them, a certain someone was spying on them, and that someone was busy taking pictures. I will be rich! RICH! RICH!
You're mine and will always be mine, he thought while hugging her. Forever.
She smiled and hugged him back. Of course, my dear fiancé...
The End
Thanks for reading.

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68 comments:

  1. Hehe Nee-chan I jus found out that most of the fanfic when Natsume and Mikan were together, Hotaru WILL always be there to take photos xP Love her xP

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  2. Sorry if I just reviewed today... I just got back from a trip...

    No sequel...?

    The chappie was okay but again a little you know fast...

    Sequel please...? *puppy dog pout*

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  3. oh sorry idky but sometimes my reviews get cut off / i liked your ending keep up the good work! o

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  4. AWW, no more update? Well LOVED IT TOO MUCH! Especially the ending! HAHAHA, Remember to update My little secret, okay?

    sakurapetal246

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  5. KAWAI! happy ending! but wait hotaru didn't say anything in this chapter right? hahaha but still it's sweet!

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  6. ...aw!

    ...its the final chappie!

    ...but its still worth it!

    ...ne, goodluck on your next story!

    ...i really love it!

    .xoxo. sammae18

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  7. OH GOD! THIS STORY ENDED! And its so nice to read thank you so much neechama! Ilove you neechama!

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  8. EH? it's the last chapter already? wah! but I really love it... and also Hotaru who's spying... hehehe!

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  9. great story...

    i love the ending...

    _

    baby_hellTiShy

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  10. yay Mikans back!Hotaru's the same as usual xD anywayz please update soon :3

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  11. Yipee!

    They are together!

    Any sequel?

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  12. Gomen nasaii for not reviewing the chapter 6...

    Hehe...

    Kya..!

    I love the ending!

    Great fanfic!

    They're really so sweet!

    Hope to read more of your fanfics in the near future..!

    Ja!

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  13. ow...

    that's so sweet...

    i rily love it...

    is this the last chapter?

    nywayz,.,.,i rily love this one...

    good job!

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  14. wow...

    its a great story...

    love this one...

    hehehehe...

    it so CUTE and nice...

    c:

    *tAnGeRiNe-jUjUbE08*

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  15. hm, yeah i'm satisfied. Pretty good story through and through!

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  16. .,what? it's the end... but... but... i still want more... and i really loved the fic so much... seriously i mean, it's really cute and i love it... so does this mean that there's no more 'My Fiance'? aww... well... still, i'll miss this fic... and... still, thanks for the story, i mean, really, thanks a lot... good luck with your future fics... thanks a lot...

    love,

    lynn

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  17. thank god

    someone have the same

    opinion about luna...

    i love it...

    and i'll be waiting for

    the updates of the other

    fics...

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  18. omg, it ended. the ending was good and nice, not giving too much or too little. and it ended with something funny, i love hotaru. thank you XD

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  19. hiyah...

    that was great...

    although the ending is not enough...

    but its good...

    i'll miss reading this fanfic

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  20. its very sweet...especially d end,its really cute n not to forget u made Hotaru rich...i'm sure she is gonna share her profit wid u n den u'll bcm more rich...he! he! he!

    all d best for d other fics..!

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  21. NO! meanie. WRITE ANOTHER ONE! XD

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  22. yoh!

    DANM! I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY!

    WHAHAHAHA...

    PLS.. MAKE MORE STORIES!

    ABOUT MIKAN AND NATSUME!

    pls! Thank You!

    hahaha!

    Your story Rockz!

    *_babyblossom91_*

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  23. nice story! hope you can make more beautiful stories such as this...!

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  24. nice story! hope you can make more beautiful stories such as this...!

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  25. wuah..

    that's good..!

    it seems that narumi always gave them free period..

    XD..

    stupid narumi..

    nice story!

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  26. Nice fic...I was actually hoping this fic would lasted much longer...Do you write any lemon by chance?

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  27. nice story... it was fun reading this... _ i'll be reading your other stories, too! oh, there were some parts that have some typos... maybe if you're feeling industrious enough you can edit them, ne? i'm looking forward to reading your other fics.

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  28. That was a good one! :D

    keep it up!

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  29. that was soo cute...hehehe. i hope you will make a sequel for this...anyway, good luck in making your upcomming stories and also i hope that you will upload soon the next chapter of the princess of sakura kingdom :D

    p.s.

    Can we be friends? I hope we can cause i want more friends here in ff :D

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  30. wow so romantic! so sweet! XD

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  31. WA i wan u to CONTINUE! XD the ending's nice! XD

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  32. that was a short story. why didn't you match make the other charactors. that would be more fun. write more stories for you do write good storys.

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  33. AW...

    KAWAII!

    so totally amazing!

    beautiful story!

    if you have any other stories like this email them to me, onegai!

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  34. aww..:D i love how things turned out to be!:D

    thanks for writing.:D great, wonderful job!:D

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  35. great story. :) i was looking around some archives and i'm rally glad i've came across this. :) great job. :)

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  36. yah, its a short one..

    but hey! its really nice :D

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  37. Wow. cool story! :D love it!

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  38. this is a really good story :}

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  39. this is a really good story :}

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  40. even though it was short it was entertaing and srry i'm really lazy so this review counts to the other chapters too.

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  41. make more stories nee-chan onegai and a sequel.

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  42. really great...as i said...on your other story...your an awesome author...;)

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  43. *GIGGle*

    Ayiiee..I really love that story..:))

    loVE it...S0 Romantic..:D..

    XP

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  44. Who was the who was saying he/she going to be rich ? well done

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  45. Still love the story...

    LOL...

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  46. wow! ilike his story also senpai!

    you are great

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  47. i like the story. short yet the story goes as follows. nice, it really runs smoothly. love it. great job. keep up.

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  48. you should make a sequel

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  49. princess aler14:07

    wow... the chapter is so cute... love it!

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  50. This was really cute. It was relaly interesting how you had Mikan and Natsume reverse roles, but it also made it quite interesting with the engagement.

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  51. hotaru wahhhhhhh y must u ruin the moment with ur crazy antics!

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  52. "I will be rich, muhaha!"

    LOL,, that was a great story. Now, I'm motivated to read all your stories!

    Lotsalove,

    -YV

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  53. Aww, lovely story! The plot was well thought out and although short, it still had a lit more than I could have hoped for. Romance, comedy, jealousy, action-ish (well, you could at least think of it), and romance. .

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  54. Read all the chapters. Love it. :)

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  55. anime freak14:12

    hey... god work keep it uo

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  56. i love how ur stories end with the title's name :) -big Uncoloured fangirl xDD

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  57. KillumeP14:13

    sweetness!

    as usual i really love your story hope many more will come

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  58. Aaaww... It's so sweet... I love it. I was really amazed because you managed to finish a whole story in only 7 chapters. Keep up the good work!

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  59. sooooooo cute :)

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